I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
hi jackson, i like how you have made a pick a path depicting a morning before school. i think maybe you could have made the backgrounds and words colourful. all in all good presentation.
Kia ora Jackson. I am a facilitator in Auckland. I enjoyed your pick a path slides, especially the amount of detail you added to your writing. Do you think you could teach other people how to do pick a path slides?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Jackson, thanks, this pick-a-path made me laugh. I like the alternate endings you created. I also like the use of different fonts for emphasis.
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ReplyDeletehi jackson, i like how you have made a pick a path depicting a morning before school. i think maybe you could have made the backgrounds and words colourful. all in all good presentation.
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ReplyDeletehi Jackson i like your slide. It's cool but mabey ad some colour
ReplyDeleteHi Jackson I like your pick a path its really cool
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jackson. I am a facilitator in Auckland. I enjoyed your pick a path slides, especially the amount of detail you added to your writing. Do you think you could teach other people how to do pick a path slides?
ReplyDeleteyeah probably
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